this is pretty snazzy. I would love it with some finishing touches. Like darkening some of the shadows(around where the hair drapes down the neck and the cheek bones). I believe if you were to darken these areas and followed through a bit more with your idea. Also if you sharpened the edges around the crown design maybe with a darker pencil and an eraser for highlights. I think that would really make this pop out. All in all a great piece....just not finished... needs a bit more love.....good good